The Magic Tree

11/2/2019

TMT- The Magic Tree  

On a hot day me and my friends were playing at my house. Suddenly a tree popped up

in front of me. It gave a fright that I screamed “that strange tree was not here before!” I

quickly realised that this is a magic tree. It started taking I got a second fright when the

tree Introduced himself. “Hello my name is Magic Tree and I came here for you because

you are the chosen one mother nature tells me to find kids so then I found you guys so you

guys need to do this. You enter me and there are four different places. Number one

The breakfast dimension. The breakfast dimension is where all the breakfast

stuff is you can name all the breakfasts like pancakes bacon cereals toast porridge

yoghurt eggs anything you want is there. Number two the lunch dimension the

lunch dimension is where you have lunch you can name

anything you want like lettuce fish toast eggs sandwich chip pies Mc donalds. Number 3 the

dinner dimension the dinner dimension is where you have dinner I can name some places that

you Can have dinner at like Mcdonalds KFC Carl’ Jr Denny's Wendy's that

all the places I can name.This is the last dimension the desert dimension the desert dimension

is where all the ice cream Is I will name some of the flavours I know like vanilla chocolate strawberry

blueberry banana.” Then we met the magic tree once again then he said “congratulations you travelled all the

way to me so for doing that you guys all deserve to have this treasure chest because you were brave and I

thought that you kids were not going to come on to this Adventure but then you did and that was really good

and I will take  All of yous home he take us all home’ we was all impressed of the adventure

we all walked back home. Wow Angeline! You have created an interesting world with many

different dimensions!Keep those ideas flowing and working hard on your writing.

Remember to use full stops and commas!

Miss Nees-Kairua